Tuesday, March 3, 2009
Fiction Comes From REALITY
This leads me to believe that using fiction to argue is much harder than just stating your case and giving the evidence. With fiction you have to create an entire story just to make a point. And beyond that the story can be anything as long as it gets a point across. This is probably the main reason that only a small number of people attain significance as fiction writers; most of us can’t just sit down and create a world that shows people what we think and how we think they should feel about a particular issue.
There are many things to take into consideration when crafting a public argument through fiction. For example the setting, it could be in outer space, it could be far in the past, or it could be set in a bleak and desperate future. Along with the setting of time is the issue of where in a culture you set the story. If I were to write a story about the current economic slump and have it set in the culture of the CEO’s who maybe lost some money, but are nowhere near as bad off as the vast majority of the population, readers would wonder what the point was. They would think why do I care about these men who may have lost some money, but also may have had a large hand in bringing the country to its knees. On the other hand, telling a story about a family who were on the edge of poverty before the economic downturn and their subsequent struggles to survive after the downturn would resonate with a lot more readers. A book such as “The Grapes of Wrath” does just this. In essence it is the culture of the moment that shapes what fiction writers must use to craft a valid and relevant public argument.
Upon writing this I now have much more respect for any writer who can use fiction to establish a legitimate position on an argument. I am sure there are countless more things than I have mentioned that writers must take into account when creating fiction. But most of all I believe it is actual reality that determines what a writer must consider when writing fiction. Again back to the objective correlative.
Fictional Writing and Public Argument
An example of the use of fiction as a form of public argument would be any novel or piece of literary fictional writing that’s main goal is to use the development of its characters, plots, and settings to portray a particular or a set of particular themes and messages to its target audience. There are many examples of World War I and World War II based literature that target their respective events and seek to discuss different themes about the wars. There are also many novels written including such books as Invisible Man and The Color Purple that try and portray different arguments surrounding racially tense issues. The main benefit of this form of public discourse is that the authors of such books have a clean slate from which to work. None of the characters in the book have any form of ethos to reference prior to reading the piece, therefore the author can successfully craft his or her characters without being limited by any preconceived notions by the audience. In real life, nearly every public figure has some form of past history and ethos to look back on, therefore skewing future opinions of the receivers of any message that that figure puts forth. Fictional writing circumvents this problem. The other main benefit of this form of public argument is that it is possible to reach a large populous of people, therefore ensuring that the discourse can be reached by many individuals.
As far as its limitations go, there are a handful of fatal ones. The first one being, that in the real world, not many people take the time to sit down and read. Given the lifestyle of many Americans and people across the world in general, there is not much time left in a person’s day to sit down and read a given literary piece, even if that person has the desire to. In an ideal world, people would take the time to read a wide variety of fictional literature, but unfortunately, we don’t live in an ideal world. So, even though this form of argument has the potential to reach a large number of people, this potential is often irrelevant because simply put, not enough individuals take part in the literary world. Various other forms of entertainment such as computers and television take up the vast majority of people’s free time, leaving no desire to take part in the reading of literature. Finally, when you have people who do actually read, not enough of these individuals are astute enough to get the full benefit of the author’s literary work. Authors of these types of fictional writings often give meaning and purpose to every minute detail of language, but often times these well intended implementations are missed and passed over, ultimately defeating the purpose of the writing in the first place. All in all, if people were more interested in literary discourse and were better evaluators of language, this form of public argument would be more useful, but until that day fictional writing in the public forum will always be considered unfulfilled potential.
Tuesday, February 24, 2009
Does persuasion still work?
Monday, February 23, 2009
Persuasion is Not Dead, Just Impossible.
I do not think it’s the sense of being wrong is what bothers people but more the idea of what they would be if they were persuaded in any issue. What I mean by this is, politics play a huge role in life today. There is simply no way to get around the topic of politics in most conversations and every where you seem to go politics are popping up somewhere. To get to the point, people in today’s society, from my experience, only want to stick to the issues that are important to their political party. You can’t agree with some issues from one political party and some from another, you have to be either democrat or republican. This is why I believe that people almost refuse to be persuaded. It is not even the action of being persuaded or the issue that is being brought to questions. It is whether your political identity will change if you are persuaded even on one single issue.
I once had a guy asked me if recycling was a ‘liberal thing’. I laughed at the question but then answered no, recycling is something anyone can do, but it is a tad bit liberal I guess. He quickly responded “no then I don’t recycle because I am a republican.” This example did not involve persuasion but it proves that people will sway one way or another depending on their political standings.
This is what leads me to think that persuasion is not entirely dead but just covered by people’s inability to be open to a new side of an issue. I may not be correct, but with my experience I think that this is true. And if it’s not for political reasons, then it is merely because people are too stubborn to hear what the other side has to say, regardless of the issue. This happens to me almost on a daily basis. I am a vegetarian and when people ask me why I respond by saying animal rights and health. People are quick to judge but they never want to hear my side. Is it because they think they know everything there is to know about vegetarianism? Or is it because they are afraid that they may be interested at the idea of being vegetarian? Vegetarianism is something different and listening to a vegetarians view on it could change their outlook on many things.
If people became more open to the idea of change and openness, maybe persuasion would come alive. But in this day in age it seems very unlikely. Heated debates on abortion, stem- cell research, foreign policy always come up somewhere in conversation, whether it is in class or just at the table with a bunch of friends. People have very strong opinions on topics like these, and don’t like to listen to other peoples opinions. If you have ever been in one of these debates then you know that instead of listening to the other person’s argument, you are most likely thinking about what you are going to say next to defend your opinion.
I guess in the long run, persuasion is not dead, just covered up by peoples inability to believe that their might be more out there than what just they believe is true. If people would relax and hear what there is to hear about any argument, I think that persuasion would come alive again. So, persuasion is not entirely dead, merely just in a coma.
Monday, February 9, 2009
The Effectiveness of a Recycling Ad

The ad that I am analyzing on this post is an ad for recycling. The first thing to catch my eyes when I look at the ad is the words in large, bold font that say “Protect his habitat. And yours.” Separating the two sentences makes the phrase more effective. To me, the period in between the two, makes a bolder statement then if it were to read ‘Protect his habitat, and yours.’ It’s kind of making the phrase two different thoughts. ‘I can be an environmentalist and protect wildlife by recycling my batteries. That’s a good thing.’ ‘Oh and I can protect my own home. That’s an even better thing.’ The same phrase by having ‘And yours.’ Added to the end, hits the soft side of humans. People are always looking for ways to protect their homes from anything and everything. This makes people more consciously aware that old batteries can be toxic to their families. If the ad just said ‘Protect his habitat’, the ad would be less effective because the demographic area that it would target would be smaller.
The writers of this ad repeat the phrase once again at the beginning of the paragraph. “When you recycle your rechargeable batteries, you preserve his environment – and ours.” Once again, the sentence is split up into two different thought processes. “You can preserve his environment,” and the second “and ours.” This time though, its saying “and ours” instead of “and yours.” So the ad adds a second thought. A person reading this can now save the environment, their individual home as well as the world as a whole. The phrases aim towards environmentalists and also to adults who are more focused on keep their homes safe.
The picture also makes the demographic of the ad more towards men. The power tool is convincing to a man because it would make them think that keeping his home and family protected is up to him. Just like he would fix something that is broken to protect his home from further damage, he should do the same to keep his family safe from old batteries. I also think that the use of HIS in the initial phrase may keep this ad leaning more towards men. It could make the man reading the article feel important because he is the keeper of his home just like the bird is the keeper of his nest. It may not be the most effective piece of the ad, but I defiantly think it has a small part in convincing the reader to recycle.
The other thing that I noticed is that the paragraph at the bottom of the ad is not just explaining the ad but it is proposing an argument. The conclusion would be “When you recycle your rechargeable batteries, you preserve his environment- and ours.” The other sentences following are small claims to back the conclusion. It’s saying if you don’t check the batteries in your cordless power tools, cordless phones, camcorders etc., then his home and yours will be in danger. The paragraph is effective because it doesn’t flat out say ‘if you don’t recycle your batteries your home is in danger’ but it does it in a more effective, almost sly way where the reader will go ‘hey maybe I should this.’
I think the components of this ad make it very effective. It is telling the readers that old batteries are toxic, and recycling can help the environment and yours. It appeals to the reader to recycle but without being to pushy on the environmental part. It appeals to men, or adults, homeowners, as well as environmentalists so the ad is not aiming towards one demographic. Putting all the components together, make the ad very effective.
Tuesday, February 3, 2009
A Thought on Ethos
When I first considered this question, I was sure what side I would come down on. It was a forgone conclusion that I would make the argument that a speaker’s reputation is far and away more important in every situation, absolutely dwarfing the weight that a particular rhetorical moment plays. The more and more I thought about it, the more and more I concluded that the question proposed isn’t exactly fair. In fact, no person can make the claim that one is more important than the other on a broad level, because every situation that a speaker/author has to express themselves must be analyzed on an individual level. For example: The United States has just come under a major terrorist attack carried out by an unknown rebel group. The country is in a panic. Someone must bring this situation under control and restore calm in the minds of her country. So who else pops on the television other than well known Al-Qaeda leader Osama Bin Laden. After several minutes of listening to his well thought out, emotionally compelling piece, Americans have a chance to process what has just happened. Will they respect and support his unusually supportive ideas on how the situation should be handled? Well, the obvious answer is absolutely not. Not only is Bin Laden well known for his terrorist attacks on sovereign nations in other countries, but also for helping coordinate the devastating terrorist acts in
Reputation Cannot be Avoided
Another point to consider is the vast amount of people who can make public arguments, after all that is what we are doing in this class. In this case and in any case where you are reading someone’s blog who you are unfamiliar with, your sense of ethos will no doubt come from what the writer has said and argued for. In fact, there are numerous rhetorical actions that require us to make judgments of character based on inanimate objects and one-line phrases. Someday when you’re walking between class take a look around you at all the bumper stickers on cars and buttons and patches on people’s backpacks. We see things such as “support our troops” and “impeach bush”, in this case we can make reasonable judgments about an individual’s political affiliations and thus what we think of their ethos. All this from the back of a car, without ever hearing the individual speak a single word.
Then there are the cases where the public knows more than they ever should, or want to about someone, thanks to the Paparazzi and the constant coverage of all celebrities. Whenever we hear celebrities speak, there are events from their past that immediately come to mind. O.J. Simpson running away in a white Bronco, Michael Jackson dangling his baby off a balcony and of course Brittany Spears, well there aren’t really any specifics besides that she is a mess. Imagine if Brittany Spears got up and read one of Barack Obama’s speeches as if it were her own. There is no way anyone in their right mind could take her seriously and believe what she was saying. The obvious and indisputable reason for this is her reputation, her unavoidable and disastrous reputation. The example doesn’t have to be this extreme for us to discount most of what celebrities say. The lesson here is that it is possible to damage your reputation so much, that anything that comes out of your mouth will be completely disregarded.
In conclusion, I don’t believe that in this modern age we can discount reputation. There are times, when reputation isn’t there and in this case we have no choice but to base our judgment of ethos on what an individual says. In contrast, any well-known speaker’s reputation is very apparent and cannot be discarded. We all saw Barack Obama on TV and in the news for two years plus, finally concluding with a half-hour infomercial. Is it really possible for us to forget everything we have seen and heard when hearing him give a speech now? No it isn’t.